Friday, May 16, 2008

Episode 431

Read the comic here.

I wasn't sure if I wanted to cut back to Past!Whiskey in the fourth panel or not - but I realized that Donut's explosive going off would probably be heard/felt by the group as they're somewhere on the same floor - although way off by the elevators at this point. Having Wash dismiss the event keeps the continuity running smooth. And I know a few of you are watching me closely on that...

First draft of Panel Four Dialog:
Past!Whiskey: what was that?? The whole building shook! The zombies must be revolting!
Past!MarySue: We did that joke already.
Past!Wash: Or we were about to.

8 comments:

Maarten said...

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Geoffrey said...

I wonder if Donut's got any last-second tricks up his sleeve he wanted to pull off. Because if not, I can't see a way out of this for Whiskey and Scotch, either.

I think the cut back to Wash and Fox in the earlier episode looks like a rather big cop-out on Doyle's part. Indeed, back in Episode 241, the storyline shows no knowledge at all of the future Whiskey/Donut/Scotch's plans to get a piece of Pat.

I would've preferred to know something more of what Donut's fate was ... 'Tis not easy to get blown to smithereens and pull yourself together again ...

Anonymous said...

If this is a Doctor Who spoof, he'll just regenerate...

Semi brick said...

Doyle,WHY?!YOU KILLED THEM ALL!

Jordan said...

dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnn

Maarten said...

Actually,
dun dun duuuuuuuuuun

Gaby said...

Why?!

Samuel said...

Aren't they made of plastic?They can pull themselves back together again, duh.